Saturday, August 10, 2013

Sacrifice

Night tides in love
Rise up, fall down, give up not
While the moon waits long

The oceans hold back
Tides from kissing the moon
So the Earth lives on

Written and composed for Haiku Heights, Prompt word: Ocean
While the tidal force is purely scientific, it can be viewed romantically by poetic, or even ignorant minds:)

8 comments:

Sumana Roy said...


nice word picture......

eyeography said...

wow...what a beautiful imagination..

Payal Ramsisaria said...

Thanks Sumana and Sumit:)

Anonymous said...

These are stunning =)

Reshma said...

Changing tides and times...Nicely done Payelle :)

Payal Ramsisaria said...

Thank you:)

Payal Ramsisaria said...

Thank you Reshma :)

Locomente said...

Ah! This is awesome...
A poetic thought!