Friday, August 2, 2013

Beach...


Womb

From the beach's womb
Little turtle as you leave
Come back one day too.


Written for Haiku Heights
Prompt Word: Beach

Message

Washed ashore by sea
Message came in bottled green
'Thanks for freeing ME'


Written for Haiku Heights
Prompt Word: Beach

10 comments:

Reshma said...

The first Haiku is very unique. Secrets hidden in the sea and seashore, nicely done :)

Ramesh Sood said...

Both haiku could have created pictures in mind without actual pictures.. well done..

RS:)

Ramesh Sood said...

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kalpana solsi said...

The bottle Haiku is very unique one.

Sumana Roy said...

A wonderful image of reciprocity.

Payal Ramsisaria said...

Thank You RS:)

Payal Ramsisaria said...

Thanks Reshma!

Unknown said...

Very imaginative Haiku. I liked both, Wonderful!

Anonymous said...

Creatively unique haiku

Amrit Sinha said...

The first haiku is too beautiful ... loved it !!!